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Topic: First-time post. A trad. drawing too. ;) |
corvax
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2001 12:55 am Subject: First-time post. A trad. drawing too. ;) |
Two crits: I find the cropping a tad awkward; since there isn't any b/g to speak of, I wouldn't give it so much of the frame - it's not what you want the viewer to concentrate on. I would also try mak ... |
Topic: site w. bunch of pictures i've never got commented on |
corvax
Replies: 3
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2001 12:27 am Subject: site w. bunch of pictures i've never got commented on |
Those are all very nice. Favorites are: DANCING - a little crisper than your other work (don't take this the wrong way; I really like the style of the other pieces), and I love the hands... HIDING SC ... |
Topic: Beggan |
corvax
Replies: 8
Views: 2227
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2001 12:23 am Subject: Beggan |
That's very nice; I really like the red nose (little tipsy?), and the shell-shocked expression is funny. It looks to me like the perspective on the part in his hair could use some work, but that's al ... |
Topic: What kind of art thread do/don't you reply to? |
corvax
Replies: 26
Views: 5868
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Forum: Digital Art Discussion Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2001 4:49 pm Subject: What kind of art thread do/don't you reply to? |
It all depends on what's been said, and what needs saying. If a pic is fantastic, but there are already a lot of posts saying so, I'll assume that my compliment isn't going to be the one that makes t ... |
Topic: Iron Gollem |
corvax
Replies: 8
Views: 1538
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2001 4:39 pm Subject: Iron Gollem |
I'm really diggin' the fiery hands. That's very cool. |
Topic: Asian Girl |
corvax
Replies: 4
Views: 891
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2001 4:20 pm Subject: Asian Girl |
Definitely post an updated version; I'm curious to see where this is going.
I think that Monkei just thought you didn't care about it, and if you don't care, you aren't going to take any c&c to heart ... |
Topic: need some help on this pls (links are fixed) |
corvax
Replies: 5
Views: 1137
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2001 1:20 pm Subject: need some help on this pls (links are fixed) |
That's neat. You want to make it look like it popped out of a comic book, eh? Well, you could add some more of these half-ellipse shapes in a line across the headphones or something like that. perhap ... |
Topic: practice with soft brushes... |
corvax
Replies: 11
Views: 1573
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2001 1:15 pm Subject: practice with soft brushes... |
Viruses from web pages: images/smiles/icon_wink.gif )
And now to redeem my seemingly off topic post: I think the right side of her mouth (her right) could be extended a little, right now it sort o ... |
Topic: Updated Realism |
corvax
Replies: 4
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2001 1:02 pm Subject: Updated Realism |
You've definitely improved the hair - good work! That said, I think it could use a little more work; it's a pretty large piece of the image.
Although you've given the hair more mass, which is good, ... |
Topic: Concept of Cyborg Chick |
corvax
Replies: 4
Views: 1315
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2001 2:43 pm Subject: Concept of Cyborg Chick |
I think you should give the legs a little more weight; the skinniness makes her look kind of fragile and unstable. (Of course, if this is what you're going for, then excellent). I agree about the li ... |
Topic: Laundry... |
corvax
Replies: 9
Views: 2074
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2001 2:36 pm Subject: Laundry... |
That's v. nice; I like the tight framing. It reminds me of Don Barnett's work - all of you should drop by images/smiles/icon_sad.gif
Never mind; it worked! Je suis une champion.
[ December 11, 2001 ... |
Topic: angel in flight! |
corvax
Replies: 2
Views: 866
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2001 2:28 pm Subject: angel in flight! |
Hey! I like it ...
minor crits: I think the area around his left wrist is a bit large... this could be just me, but take a look. Also, he looks to me like he's gliding, and if he is, the wings shou ... |
Topic: new mobility concept |
corvax
Replies: 5
Views: 1491
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2001 2:23 pm Subject: new mobility concept |
Sounds intriguing - where's the pic? images/smiles/icon_smile.gif |
Topic: pictures |
corvax
Replies: 7
Views: 1710
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2001 11:58 pm Subject: pictures |
Any of you guys know of an artist named Drew Tucker? He does w/c work that looks very similar to this. (Which is lovely, by the way).
I like it plenty. |
Topic: Punisher and others... |
corvax
Replies: 6
Views: 1587
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2001 10:47 pm Subject: Punisher and others... |
Wow! I really like the style in those... C&C, umm, perhaps ... (grasping at straws) ... the perspective on the gun looks a little odd; the gun body isn't in a straight line with his arm. If you meant ... |
Topic: Wow, a new computer, help me please!!! |
corvax
Replies: 11
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Forum: Random Musings Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2001 12:52 am Subject: Wow, a new computer, help me please!!! |
Dell is a reliable company, that offers a good range of tech support, etc, for their customers. However, you pay for this support. If, like my grandparents, you plan to phone them up weekly because ... |
Topic: in need of a crit or two! |
corvax
Replies: 8
Views: 2355
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2001 12:32 am Subject: in need of a crit or two! |
I like these. You've got a few different subjects, you're experimenting with different styles and types of drawing... very encouraging. There may be one or two errors, but don't let those worry you; ... |
Topic: Speed painting |
corvax
Replies: 432
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2001 12:12 am Subject: Speed painting |
First, a disclaimer. I'm not going to talk about WMS/SD/Craig/Mr. Mullins at all, because, really, there's nothing for me to say...
Palladia Mors and Oblagon, those are both beautiful. Lovely, love ... |
Topic: Diving into colours with some more ladies |
corvax
Replies: 7
Views: 1929
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2001 11:34 pm Subject: Diving into colours with some more ladies |
Those are all very nice looking! Keep up the good work!
My only crit would be that you seem to be in need of a more limited palette; I'm particularly talking about #2. If you look at it in stripes ... |
Topic: business bunnies wake up from their middlemanagement slumber |
corvax
Replies: 19
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2001 11:17 pm Subject: business bunnies wake up from their middlemanagement slumber |
These are fantastic. The only crit that I can see is that the shoe of tragic Mr. Rabbit seems to be rather larger than the foot it belongs on ... How nitpicky is that?!
Great work; terrific sense of ... |
Topic: Glowing sword, lunchbreak quickie.. |
corvax
Replies: 6
Views: 1388
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2001 10:53 am Subject: Glowing sword, lunchbreak quickie.. |
How long is your lunchbreak? |
Topic: ilumination scene... night |
corvax
Replies: 17
Views: 4220
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 1:36 pm Subject: ilumination scene... night |
This looks gorgeous. If I had any crits, I would give the path a curve, instead of having it go straight up the picture plane. I think that would help balance the image, and draw the eye to your foc ... |
Topic: Laziness- The Worst Enemy |
corvax
Replies: 19
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Forum: Digital Art Discussion Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2001 2:14 pm Subject: Laziness- The Worst Enemy |
Everybody has the same problem at some time or another; art takes practice, and practicing can't always be fun.
I've been doing the same thing as you, Shinji, having recently purchased a new sketchbo ... |
Topic: 2 new paintings and a question |
corvax
Replies: 5
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2001 5:09 pm Subject: 2 new paintings and a question |
I really like the composition on the martial arts guy; very dynamic. It looks to me like the sword is a bit low in the crook of his arm - perhaps going through it? However, this is a very minor deta ... |
Topic: First post |
corvax
Replies: 10
Views: 2455
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 10:33 am Subject: First post |
I'm digging the atmosphere of this pic ... Film-Noir, Bladerunner hippo. I like the illustrative quality. Good work! |
Topic: star creft |
corvax
Replies: 34
Views: 10139
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2001 11:12 pm Subject: star creft |
Those are quite fantastic. My only crit would be to make the Zerg look ... more gooey; they seem a bit clean. Otherwise, i'm floored. |
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