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  Topic: First-time post. A trad. drawing too. ;)
corvax

Replies: 9
Views: 2262

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2001 12:55 am   Subject: First-time post. A trad. drawing too. ;)
Two crits:
I find the cropping a tad awkward; since there isn't any b/g to speak of, I wouldn't give it so much of the frame - it's not what you want the viewer to concentrate on.
I would also try mak ...
  Topic: site w. bunch of pictures i've never got commented on
corvax

Replies: 3
Views: 1126

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2001 12:27 am   Subject: site w. bunch of pictures i've never got commented on
Those are all very nice. Favorites are:
DANCING - a little crisper than your other work (don't take this the wrong way; I really like the style of the other pieces), and I love the hands...
HIDING SC ...
  Topic: Beggan
corvax

Replies: 8
Views: 2227

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2001 12:23 am   Subject: Beggan
That's very nice; I really like the red nose (little tipsy?), and the shell-shocked expression is funny. It looks to me like the perspective on the part in his hair could use some work, but that's al ...
  Topic: What kind of art thread do/don't you reply to?
corvax

Replies: 26
Views: 5868

PostForum: Digital Art Discussion   Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2001 4:49 pm   Subject: What kind of art thread do/don't you reply to?
It all depends on what's been said, and what needs saying. If a pic is fantastic, but there are already a lot of posts saying so, I'll assume that my compliment isn't going to be the one that makes t ...
  Topic: Iron Gollem
corvax

Replies: 8
Views: 1538

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2001 4:39 pm   Subject: Iron Gollem
I'm really diggin' the fiery hands.
That's very cool.
  Topic: Asian Girl
corvax

Replies: 4
Views: 891

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2001 4:20 pm   Subject: Asian Girl
Definitely post an updated version; I'm curious to see where this is going.

I think that Monkei just thought you didn't care about it, and if you don't care, you aren't going to take any c&c to heart ...
  Topic: need some help on this pls (links are fixed)
corvax

Replies: 5
Views: 1137

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2001 1:20 pm   Subject: need some help on this pls (links are fixed)
That's neat.
You want to make it look like it popped out of a comic book, eh?
Well, you could add some more of these half-ellipse shapes in a line across the headphones or something like that. perhap ...
  Topic: practice with soft brushes...
corvax

Replies: 11
Views: 1573

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2001 1:15 pm   Subject: practice with soft brushes...
Viruses from web pages:
images/smiles/icon_wink.gif )

And now to redeem my seemingly off topic post:
I think the right side of her mouth (her right) could be extended a little, right now it sort o ...
  Topic: Updated Realism
corvax

Replies: 4
Views: 1407

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2001 1:02 pm   Subject: Updated Realism
You've definitely improved the hair - good work! That said, I think it could use a little more work; it's a pretty large piece of the image.

Although you've given the hair more mass, which is good, ...
  Topic: Concept of Cyborg Chick
corvax

Replies: 4
Views: 1315

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2001 2:43 pm   Subject: Concept of Cyborg Chick
I think you should give the legs a little more weight; the skinniness makes her look kind of fragile and unstable. (Of course, if this is what you're going for, then excellent). I agree about the li ...
  Topic: Laundry...
corvax

Replies: 9
Views: 2074

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2001 2:36 pm   Subject: Laundry...
That's v. nice; I like the tight framing.
It reminds me of Don Barnett's work - all of you should drop by images/smiles/icon_sad.gif

Never mind; it worked! Je suis une champion.

[ December 11, 2001 ...
  Topic: angel in flight!
corvax

Replies: 2
Views: 866

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2001 2:28 pm   Subject: angel in flight!
Hey! I like it ...

minor crits: I think the area around his left wrist is a bit large... this could be just me, but take a look. Also, he looks to me like he's gliding, and if he is, the wings shou ...
  Topic: new mobility concept
corvax

Replies: 5
Views: 1491

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2001 2:23 pm   Subject: new mobility concept
Sounds intriguing - where's the pic? images/smiles/icon_smile.gif
  Topic: pictures
corvax

Replies: 7
Views: 1710

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2001 11:58 pm   Subject: pictures
Any of you guys know of an artist named Drew Tucker? He does w/c work that looks very similar to this. (Which is lovely, by the way).

I like it plenty.
  Topic: Punisher and others...
corvax

Replies: 6
Views: 1587

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2001 10:47 pm   Subject: Punisher and others...
Wow!
I really like the style in those...
C&C, umm, perhaps ... (grasping at straws) ... the perspective on the gun looks a little odd; the gun body isn't in a straight line with his arm. If you meant ...
  Topic: Wow, a new computer, help me please!!!
corvax

Replies: 11
Views: 4646

PostForum: Random Musings   Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2001 12:52 am   Subject: Wow, a new computer, help me please!!!
Dell is a reliable company, that offers a good range of tech support, etc, for their customers. However, you pay for this support. If, like my grandparents, you plan to phone them up weekly because ...
  Topic: in need of a crit or two!
corvax

Replies: 8
Views: 2355

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2001 12:32 am   Subject: in need of a crit or two!
I like these. You've got a few different subjects, you're experimenting with different styles and types of drawing... very encouraging. There may be one or two errors, but don't let those worry you; ...
  Topic: Speed painting
corvax

Replies: 432
Views: 126762

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Thu Nov 22, 2001 12:12 am   Subject: Speed painting
First, a disclaimer. I'm not going to talk about WMS/SD/Craig/Mr. Mullins at all, because, really, there's nothing for me to say...

Palladia Mors and Oblagon, those are both beautiful. Lovely, love ...
  Topic: Diving into colours with some more ladies
corvax

Replies: 7
Views: 1929

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2001 11:34 pm   Subject: Diving into colours with some more ladies
Those are all very nice looking! Keep up the good work!

My only crit would be that you seem to be in need of a more limited palette; I'm particularly talking about #2. If you look at it in stripes ...
  Topic: business bunnies wake up from their middlemanagement slumber
corvax

Replies: 19
Views: 4336

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2001 11:17 pm   Subject: business bunnies wake up from their middlemanagement slumber
These are fantastic. The only crit that I can see is that the shoe of tragic Mr. Rabbit seems to be rather larger than the foot it belongs on ... How nitpicky is that?!

Great work; terrific sense of ...
  Topic: Glowing sword, lunchbreak quickie..
corvax

Replies: 6
Views: 1388

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2001 10:53 am   Subject: Glowing sword, lunchbreak quickie..
How long is your lunchbreak?
  Topic: ilumination scene... night
corvax

Replies: 17
Views: 4220

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2001 1:36 pm   Subject: ilumination scene... night
This looks gorgeous. If I had any crits, I would give the path a curve, instead of having it go straight up the picture plane. I think that would help balance the image, and draw the eye to your foc ...
  Topic: Laziness- The Worst Enemy
corvax

Replies: 19
Views: 5432

PostForum: Digital Art Discussion   Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2001 2:14 pm   Subject: Laziness- The Worst Enemy
Everybody has the same problem at some time or another; art takes practice, and practicing can't always be fun.

I've been doing the same thing as you, Shinji, having recently purchased a new sketchbo ...
  Topic: 2 new paintings and a question
corvax

Replies: 5
Views: 1240

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2001 5:09 pm   Subject: 2 new paintings and a question
I really like the composition on the martial arts guy; very dynamic. It looks to me like the sword is a bit low in the crook of his arm - perhaps going through it? However, this is a very minor deta ...
  Topic: First post
corvax

Replies: 10
Views: 2455

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Mon Oct 22, 2001 10:33 am   Subject: First post
I'm digging the atmosphere of this pic ... Film-Noir, Bladerunner hippo. I like the illustrative quality. Good work!
  Topic: star creft
corvax

Replies: 34
Views: 10139

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Mon Oct 15, 2001 11:12 pm   Subject: star creft
Those are quite fantastic. My only crit would be to make the Zerg look ... more gooey; they seem a bit clean.
Otherwise, i'm floored.
 
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