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Topic: Attempt at the tablet |
bitz
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Thu May 22, 2003 1:35 pm Subject: ! |
Looking good Matthew! No worries, everyone can do a repaint if they want. It actually inspires me to want to do one too!
I'll post another repaint as soon as I have the time.
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bitz |
Topic: Attempt at the tablet |
bitz
Replies: 8
Views: 2520
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Wed May 21, 2003 7:33 pm Subject: oy |
Now I feel bad. haha! Well, thanks for showing me the potential that the painting had insider, that kicks ass
It's alot more clean than mine was. If you feel like screwing around with it more ... |
Topic: Web Page Screenshot, I need tips with my design. wip |
bitz
Replies: 18
Views: 4905
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Tue May 20, 2003 1:27 pm Subject: Go for ut |
Hey Matthew,
Feel free to link my site from yours After your site is done, just give me the URL and I'll post a link up on the phase2.net site.
Nice job on the site, looking alot better!
- ... |
Topic: Web Page Screenshot, I need tips with my design. wip |
bitz
Replies: 18
Views: 4905
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Sat May 17, 2003 4:46 pm Subject: Looking better |
Hey Matthew, looking good. One last tip would to be to shorten the cell size for the table that is containing the text so that it's the same size as the menu and picture above.
That way, you have ... |
Topic: Web Page Screenshot, I need tips with my design. wip |
bitz
Replies: 18
Views: 4905
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Fri May 16, 2003 5:02 pm Subject: Maybe center. |
Hey Matthew. The top part definetly looks better. If you're looking for more balance to it, try and do everything centered.
If you're looking for ideas, you can look at several web pages for 'sid ... |
Topic: A BLUE HORNET GUY AND A NO SOO HAPPY KNIGT |
bitz
Replies: 14
Views: 5200
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Fri May 16, 2003 4:55 pm Subject: Anatomy |
Hey there Vamp,
On the blue guy, for the forearm, the muscles actually come in from the elbow towards the body, rather than move outwards. The brachioradialis and the ext. carpi rad longus ( I onl ... |
Topic: BIOHAZARD Man - c&c please |
bitz
Replies: 5
Views: 2157
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Fri May 16, 2003 12:50 pm Subject: Somethings.. |
Somethings you might want to practice on -
Varying your line weight, meaning, try and use different thickness of lines. One common practice is to do outlines and countour lines in a much thicker, ... |
Topic: Attempt at the tablet |
bitz
Replies: 8
Views: 2520
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Fri May 16, 2003 8:47 am Subject: Ack |
Heh, actually, that isn't a filter
I was screwing around with some brushes I got from the eatpoo.com forums, just had it set to a rather large diameter and did a couple strokes of each color. ... |
Topic: Attempt at the tablet |
bitz
Replies: 8
Views: 2520
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Thu May 15, 2003 5:27 pm Subject: Agreed |
Hey Matthew,
Yeah, I definetly agree on the lack of contrast, I just didn't notice it until today when I went and looked at my own post. I'll play around with some more differing values and see if ... |
Topic: Web Page Screenshot, I need tips with my design. wip |
bitz
Replies: 18
Views: 4905
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Thu May 15, 2003 12:55 pm Subject: Web Page Screenshot, I need tips with my design. wip |
Hey Matthew,
Why not move the top left image above the menu bar with the -Lensflares.net- ? That way the whole page can be moved to the left.
Also, you might just want to have a 'Gallery' link, ... |
Topic: Attempt at the tablet |
bitz
Replies: 8
Views: 2520
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Wed May 14, 2003 11:42 pm Subject: Attempt at the tablet |
Trying to get used to my tablet again ( it was closested for awhile ). This took about 45 minutes to do and I know I did alot of stuff wrong ( the ear is too small and I can't manage to get the eye t ... |
Topic: Sketches |
bitz
Replies: 1
Views: 1033
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Forum: Work in Progress Posted: Fri May 09, 2003 4:47 pm Subject: Sketches |
i don't usually post, most of the time i just watch, but i figured i should get used to getting crits anyways, most of these done at work ( i'm a unix sys admin ) while waiting for stuff to compil ... |
Topic: Reconnaissance Mechwarrior Being Repaired (geek alert or wha |
bitz
Replies: 62
Views: 108289
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Forum: Archive : Sep99 - Dec00 Posted: Fri Dec 29, 2000 10:32 am Subject: Reconnaissance Mechwarrior Being Repaired (geek alert or wha |
me like.
as for the bullet holes, it looks more like someone with a big sniper rifle took pot shots at him.
you might want to center them around an area more, as if the gun streaked across or it ran ... |
Topic: Prince of Persia ! Plz CRIT |
bitz
Replies: 2
Views: 1305
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Forum: Archive : Sep99 - Dec00 Posted: Fri Dec 22, 2000 1:53 pm Subject: Prince of Persia ! Plz CRIT |
that's a really cool pic. maybe it's the style you were going for, but the major thing is what Awetopsy mentioned, it's too flat.
It looks like a painting from an ancient time, but if you were going ... |
Topic: what do you think |
bitz
Replies: 5
Views: 1605
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Forum: Archive : Sep99 - Dec00 Posted: Fri Dec 22, 2000 1:45 pm Subject: what do you think |
I don't quite get the second picture, or at least, those little images on the sides.
Anyways, the light coming down should be alot more of a gradient, not those squiggly lines that you have. Also, s ... |
Topic: [Crit] Joe Madureira's Batman\Superman... page 2 |
bitz
Replies: 10
Views: 2332
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Forum: Archive : Sep99 - Dec00 Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2000 12:06 am Subject: [Crit] Joe Madureira's Batman\Superman... page 2 |
Hey Chapel, look'n good http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif
Only thing that really bothered me was the last cell of the closeup of Superman's face, the shadowing seems a bit off for the light ... |
Topic: PortfolioFrontpage/RaidersDrawing. |
bitz
Replies: 4
Views: 1462
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Forum: Archive : Sep99 - Dec00 Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2000 2:49 pm Subject: PortfolioFrontpage/RaidersDrawing. |
me? steal? bah!
it's mine! dabnammit! you're the the thief!
<grumbles>
http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/biggrin.gif
-- bitz |
Topic: Frazetta Claus... |
bitz
Replies: 9
Views: 2821
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Forum: Archive : Sep99 - Dec00 Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2000 2:46 pm Subject: Frazetta Claus... |
Very nice http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif
Only crit: Did he just fall into that spot? :P I don't see any footprints!!
-- bitz |
Topic: PortfolioFrontpage/RaidersDrawing. |
bitz
Replies: 4
Views: 1462
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Forum: Archive : Sep99 - Dec00 Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2000 11:59 am Subject: PortfolioFrontpage/RaidersDrawing. |
Aaah! Those books do rule http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif
There are probably alot of scenes in those books that could inspire some art.
Anyways, critique.. uhm, I can't really make out wh ... |
Topic: [crit+help] pigman |
bitz
Replies: 8
Views: 1932
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Forum: Archive : Sep99 - Dec00 Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2000 2:28 pm Subject: [crit+help] pigman |
looks nice so far, only thing i noticed is that the teeth seem a bit undefined.
-- bitz |
Topic: eye ball critique |
bitz
Replies: 2
Views: 987
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Forum: Archive : Sep99 - Dec00 Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2000 1:56 pm Subject: eye ball critique |
hey jim, it's look really nice. http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif
i would suggest adding some shading under the top eyelid though, the eye isn't pure white and does accept shadows. you seem ... |
Topic: [img]I'm a complete newbie... new here |
bitz
Replies: 7
Views: 2253
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Forum: Archive : Sep99 - Dec00 Posted: Fri Dec 15, 2000 8:35 pm Subject: [img]I'm a complete newbie... new here |
Hey Infested,
You've got a nice start going there, but some shading would go along way to increasing the volume of the picture and making it less 2D.
also, it seems that the gun is recoiling her arm ... |
Topic: school advice and lighting question |
bitz
Replies: 4
Views: 1608
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Forum: Archive : Sep99 - Dec00 Posted: Fri Dec 15, 2000 8:26 pm Subject: school advice and lighting question |
I'd be looking to concentrate more on figure drawing/character design with a background in 3d animation and storyboarding.
Currently I'm a unix sys admin for a large 'smart cache' system and really, ... |
Topic: school advice and lighting question |
bitz
Replies: 4
Views: 1608
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Forum: Archive : Sep99 - Dec00 Posted: Fri Dec 15, 2000 2:34 pm Subject: school advice and lighting question |
thanks frost.
-- bitz |
Topic: school advice and lighting question |
bitz
Replies: 4
Views: 1608
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Forum: Archive : Sep99 - Dec00 Posted: Fri Dec 15, 2000 2:20 pm Subject: school advice and lighting question |
alright, first question - schools. i've been looking into the following -
art center ( pasadena, ca ) associates in art ( sherman oaks, ca ) henry cogswell ( washington ) digipen ( washington ) ( als ... |
Topic: Too messy? (new quickie.). |
bitz
Replies: 19
Views: 3374
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Forum: Archive : Sep99 - Dec00 Posted: Fri Dec 15, 2000 12:58 am Subject: Too messy? (new quickie.). |
hey micke, nice drawing, i like the expression he has. only place that seemed too messy to me was the forehead area around the highlight.
-- bitz |
Topic: Something shiny..... |
bitz
Replies: 11
Views: 2816
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Forum: Archive : Sep99 - Dec00 Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2000 3:54 pm Subject: Something shiny..... |
Feng was mentioning in a different post that he uses 3d studio to setup a quick perspective set just so he can reference it.
It'd probably be really helpful to have the major perspective lines there ... |
Topic: Something shiny..... |
bitz
Replies: 11
Views: 2816
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Forum: Archive : Sep99 - Dec00 Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2000 1:45 pm Subject: Something shiny..... |
Feng was mentioning in a different post that he uses 3d studio to setup a quick perspective set just so he can reference it.
It'd probably be really helpful to have the major perspective lines there ... |
Topic: [CRIT] Damn, not another critique... |
bitz
Replies: 8
Views: 2346
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Forum: Archive : Sep99 - Dec00 Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2000 1:42 pm Subject: [CRIT] Damn, not another critique... |
Hey Flint, it's looking alot better now that it's colored. Same crits with the axe as it seems the weapon would be following the line of the arm, since it appears he was swinging in an inward motion ... |
Topic: colored wizard sketch [crit] |
bitz
Replies: 8
Views: 2052
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Forum: Archive : Sep99 - Dec00 Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2000 10:14 am Subject: colored wizard sketch [crit] |
thanks for all the crits/comments guys! noticed alot of people made comments about how he looks sort of short, which were the same crits i got with the sketched version, i sort of just colored it as a ... |
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