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http://www.obnoxiousjerks.com/images/michael_final2.jpg

Ahh, I think I see what you mean. The first thing that caught my eye was "wow, that's a long arm" .. shading and defining that area would probably help a lot.

His left arm seems a bit too large entirely.. it's farther extended, yet the elbow drops lower (doubly confusing since it's farter away), also the bicep and shoulder all feels too large. I think this ...

Thanks again.. I've hit that point where I'm happy with it so I'm going to leave it like it is. I wanted that lighter 'leathery' look, for the sort of tongue-in-cheek, potentially cheesy "snake sheddi ...

Thanks! I tried smoothing her bottom out a little.. not sure how to go about fixing the arms; to be honest they still look fine to me.

http://www.obnoxiousjerks.com/images/baroness11c.jpg

http://www.obnoxiousjerks.com/images/baroness11b.jpg

Took close to 11 hours to complete; used photo for skin and pistol reference, the rest was original. Comments/Critiques welcome and wanted!

As much as I absolutely hate the Mustang (and pretty much all American cars), that is pretty smooth. If you want to make it the 'fastback', tho, try giving it a more "swooping" curve going into the ba ...

Before I go any further, I want to say that I REALLY, REALLY like this design. It has a good blending of old and new with a heavy retro look. It's gorgeous and INCREDIBLY well modeled. The only proble ...

The only real crit I have is that it seems like the skin of the arms and neck is overlapping the shirt. The shirt looks like it's supposed to be loose farther down, but tight around the chest and stuf ...

quote:Originally posted by Dryfire:
nothing is wrong with the eyes ;-) i'm kinda mixing spawn's eyes withthe traditional spidey's.... one is supposed to be larger ;-)

While that's a good idea, there' ...

Oh man, that's awesome! I LOVE the use of colors and lighting... everything about it is great. You could easily turn him into a full-fledged character with little work at this point, he already has pl ...

quote:Originally posted by geoman2k:
not bad at all. few thinks tho....
1. don't have the sections open in a new window.... its anoying.
2. make the image quality higher on the strips... i hate jpeg d ...

I hate to sound like I'm plugging, but what I'm actually looking for is some honest critiques on my style and method. The url is:

[url=http://www.geocities.com/nearsightedcomic]http://www.geocities.c ...

I don't think the neck needs to be darker.. if anything, it needs to be lighter so it blends in more with the face.. also, you might want to give more of an impression of the muscles in the neck, even ...

The neck is the only thing I notice that stands out. It seems too thick, and too separate from everything else. It should blend in more with the jaw line. Hiding it with the hair like the original mig ...

quoteWhoah, the 3rd guy! Looks like some psycho maniac..maybe that's the impression you get from chatting to unknown strangers online

Actually, that's what I was going for.. I didn't think the first ...

OK, here's version 2.0 of the first drawing. I approached this one differently in hopes if getting SOME kind of response.

http://www.wayxcable.com/~tr3m0rx/images/evil2pointoh.jpg

I'm still trying ...

My only real crit would be to make the neck thinner and longer. Not MUCH, but as it is now she looks very masculine in that area.

As for her 'personality', she looks like she would be vindictive, sed ...

I think the perspective on the sword throws it off a little, and I agree, the face has a bit of a blank expression, rather than giving any sense of reaction from his surroundings. Other than that, it ...

Nevermind.

Actually, it's not that the ear is too small, but it's too high. The top of the ear should be about level with the eyebrow, and the bottom about level with the mouth. Other than that, it looks great ( ...

Well, that was productive. Anyway, here is my second character. Tell me what you think. I was just goofing around with coloring, I don't plan on doing much shading or anything, at least not until I ca ...

quoteHoly sweet mother of God, that's a good looking fellow. Look out, ladies.

You're a sad, sad, man, Evil. Seek help, k? :P

Anyway, any CONSTRUCTIVE comments?

OMG.. it looks just like Helena Christensen, only without hair... stunning! http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif

I'm trying to start up a little web-comic with another guy I know online, and so far this is what I've come up with. This is his caricature, which he says is VERY close to his likeness. Of course, the ...

It seems to me that everything Yahoo! touches turns to crap. When Geocities was self-supported, it wasn't too bad. Limited banner ads, hardly any intrusive material, and outside linking. Yahoo! buys t ...

I really like the concept. What I would recommend is actually giving it more anatomically accurate wings. Look at lots of pictures of large birds, and note how the wings are structured and move. They ...

Try freeservers.com ... I'm pretty sure they let you link out.

The only thing I notice wrong with it are the fingers in the hand holding the controller... they seem a bit stubby. Maybe have them wrap more around the base of the controller, so it looks more like s ...

First off, I'll say that I am an active Christian. Flame all you want.

However, I have to partially agree with Mozeman. I don't see where it's fair to everyone to force religion through policy. We'r ...