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Oops... strike the sentence about location.

I agree with SlightlyTwisted... they're just a distraction. And what happened to the text saying where you're from? I found it quite interesting to see where people come from.

I love the film, I love the soundtrack and your picture captures the mood of the film very well.

It would, however, feel more like Jack Skellington if he had an evil grin on his face. Just an opinion ...

The face looks a little flat. Try playing with shadows.

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/Mr. Stagger Lee

I assume that you want it commented, since you posted it here, so here goes;

The forhead should be higher, the eyes should be in the middle of the head. That is a mistake people often make.
The eyes ...

I am aware of that, but since he can't be bothered to walk 10 meters to ask me what I think, I'll just say it here... http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif

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/Mr. Stagger Lee ...

I'll begin with the body.

Over all I feel that the lines are too sharp (the line running down her abdomen, which also goes too far up, the line in her back and the V-shape that connects to the uhm.. ...

Sounds like a splendid idea.

Where can I get hold of Loomis' figure drawing book?

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/Mr. Stagger Lee

Ok, that's kind of what I figured as well. I have tons of quick real life sketches, just have to throw something together with lots of colors. Methinks.

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/Mr. Stagger Lee

I just discovered that we have Painter 6 at work, so I wanted to test it. This one took 10 minutes to make and it's no masterpiece, but I kinda like it. http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif

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I want to get in to classic art schools and I'm putting together a portfolio. My work as a modeller/texturer at a game company takes a lot of time and strength and I don't have that much time to do an ...

Thanks for the critique, all. I will make the texture (and the model) less symmetrical.

You were supposed to crit the pic, not me, though. No, I do not have any cheekbones. http://www.sijun.com/dha ...

Is it too late to be added? Seems to be an old thread (?).

Username: Mr. Stagger Lee
Field: Computer Games
Company Name: Digital Illusions STHLM (www.dice.se)
Job Description: Senior Artist. Modellin ...

Yes, I was just working on the eyes.

Here's a new render:

http://www.otakt.com/rikard/Jag10fix.jpg

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/Mr. Stagger Lee

G_Luder:
They tell me it looks like me, only without hair (I just can't get the grips of Shave & Haircut).
Any kind of ideas that would make it more interesting, comments about lighting and so on. i t ...

It's not supposed to look good, it's supposed to look like me. http://www.sijun.com/dhabih/ubb/smile.gif

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/Mr. Stagger Lee

Forgot the link...
[url=http://www.otakt.com/rikard/Jag5.JPG]http://www.otakt.com/rikard/Jag5.JPG

I'm working on a selfportrait (3D), and I've modelled the (my) head, but I've run out of ideas... anyone got any good ones that are fairly simple to execute? It's for my resume, and I need to be finis ...