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  Topic: Amy Wong (adult)
KleptomaN

Replies: 14
Views: 3263

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2002 5:35 am   Subject: Amy Wong (adult)
The left thigh is actually alright, and so i the face.

Crits:
Her right leg is all wrong. It bends th strangely, and in an incorrect angle.
Also, her left shoulder seems to be non-existant.
  Topic: ms paint thread
KleptomaN

Replies: 18
Views: 3534

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2002 5:05 am   Subject: ms paint thread
http://personal.zahav.net.il/personalsite/da/danielki/peeWeeLarge.gif

And another - Iron Maiden's Eddie (I posted this long ago)
http://personal.zahav.net.il/personalsite/da/danielki/eddieFace.gif
  Topic: Colored pic
KleptomaN

Replies: 2
Views: 974

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2001 3:47 am   Subject: Colored pic
You need to replace the space with %20, otherwise, to make the img tag work, like this (press quote on my post to see)
http://www.maverickcomm.org/wolfe4444/power%20forbidden/gallery/wolfevscross2.jp ...
  Topic: Post your quick sketches..
KleptomaN

Replies: 11
Views: 2197

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2001 11:39 pm   Subject: Post your quick sketches..
http://www.yod.net/members/kleptoman/gfx/edfaceh.JPG

Eddie (Iron Maiden's mascot) - an MSPAINT sketch. Took too long to make (30 mins: less than 10 mins for the initial drawing, then more than 20 ...
  Topic: more stuff at work (this almost got me in trouble)
KleptomaN

Replies: 4
Views: 1242

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2001 11:20 pm   Subject: more stuff at work (this almost got me in trouble)
It's obvious he isn't aiming for realism, man. Cut him some slack.

My only crit is that it's suffering from "left hand bend" or whatever it's called. Everything is leaning to the left.
  Topic: stitches - please critique
KleptomaN

Replies: 10
Views: 2175

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2001 4:46 pm   Subject: stitches - please critique
Love those eyes. This piece is almost perfect.

Ooh, and an answer to your question: #1 > #2.
  Topic: Ripley (Aliens)
KleptomaN

Replies: 3
Views: 1497

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2001 4:12 pm   Subject: Ripley (Aliens)
Very well done, BUT:
1) IMO Something is wrong with the nose. The left nostril looks... I dunno, out of place somehow. You should either make the right nostril more visible, or cut off some of the lef ...
  Topic: some sketches
KleptomaN

Replies: 5
Views: 2078

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2001 3:52 pm   Subject: some sketches
My favourite is the mad scientist.
  Topic: New Picture
KleptomaN

Replies: 3
Views: 926

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2001 1:17 pm   Subject: New Picture
Cool.

But I see 2 problems.

1) The cape doesn't really look like cloth. The shading on it is too random.
2) Right hand bend (the character is streached to the right)
  Topic: urban photoship girl
KleptomaN

Replies: 16
Views: 4042

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 11:42 pm   Subject: urban photoship girl
Ecellent. Almost photorealistic.

I can't think of anything else to say.
  Topic: First finished digital painting - Crits please :)
KleptomaN

Replies: 8
Views: 2192

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 11:37 pm   Subject: First finished digital painting - Crits please :)
quote:Originally posted by DreamLight:
Okay i can't get this f^&king pic to load.. i know there are some problems with links to geocities pics... can anyone help me out?

1. Rename the image file's ex ...
  Topic: EDDIE (a sketch)
KleptomaN

Replies: 4
Views: 1481

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 4:33 pm   Subject: EDDIE (a sketch)
Thanks for the comments, btw.
  Topic: New to this board
KleptomaN

Replies: 9
Views: 2334

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 4:28 pm   Subject: New to this board
Whoa.... very niiiiiice.

I think the smoke is a bit too thick (I'm probably wrong), but everything else is just perfect.

EDIT: Ahh, but I found a fault: the smoke doesn't cast a shadow, and it shoul ...
  Topic: Elf with Blades
KleptomaN

Replies: 4
Views: 1248

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 4:16 pm   Subject: Elf with Blades
I like it.

It needs some cleaning, though - especially the stray lines and the coloring on the right arm.

The blades could also use a bit of smoothing and highlighting.
  Topic: Wanted to contribute a little piece
KleptomaN

Replies: 4
Views: 1189

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 3:41 pm   Subject: Wanted to contribute a little piece
What is that? I don't get it.
  Topic: New to this board
KleptomaN

Replies: 9
Views: 2334

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 3:31 pm   Subject: New to this board
Hint:

You can't link images directly from your machine. You'll need to find a host, upload your image there and then link to it.

Yod.net is great for this purpose.
Geocities.com is good too, but it ...
  Topic: EDDIE (a sketch)
KleptomaN

Replies: 4
Views: 1481

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2001 7:51 am   Subject: EDDIE (a sketch)
Yup. 100% mspaint + tablet.

I used thin frequent lines, and that airbrush tool and experimented with colors a bit. The intentionally sloppy mix of dark green, greys and black gave nice a nice result. ...
  Topic: eyewoo.com - my new website
KleptomaN

Replies: 11
Views: 2597

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2001 4:07 pm   Subject: eyewoo.com - my new website
Damn, "stream" and "swimhole" are awesome.

As for the site, well, I like the navigation and design, but not the choice of colors.
  Topic: EDDIE (a sketch)
KleptomaN

Replies: 4
Views: 1481

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2001 3:35 pm   Subject: EDDIE (a sketch)
http://kleptoman.yod.net/gfx/edfaceh.JPG

Say hello to Eddie (the thing that appears on Iron Maiden album covers).

Took about 10 mins to draw, another 20-30 for screwing around (mainly adding ...
  Topic: First time here, so dont hit me
KleptomaN

Replies: 12
Views: 2420

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2001 2:14 pm   Subject: First time here, so dont hit me
I don't really like #1 and #3. They look too... undinished and smeared.

The unicorn and magneto rock ass, though. Only a few slight crit's:

pic #3) The grass looks like green water. You could fix ...
  Topic: B/W & Color Anime
KleptomaN

Replies: 9
Views: 2259

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 4:11 pm   Subject: B/W & Color Anime
All I see is TEH SECKSI RED X's.

But it's probably my stupid ISP's fault. Or not.
  Topic: nude apple
KleptomaN

Replies: 5
Views: 1417

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 4:06 pm   Subject: nude apple
You can trick the Geocities server into allowing direct linking if you rename the pics' exttesion to TXT.

But they will probably find out about this 'backdoor' soon anough, so it's best you try some ...
  Topic: Hey all here is a new one for ya "tits"
KleptomaN

Replies: 7
Views: 1915

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 2:16 pm   Subject: Hey all here is a new one for ya "tits"
Star Trek fan, eh?

It's all very well done. I especially like the background, and the machinery.
I don't see the point in the "tits", though. Borg queens don't need 'em.
  Topic: Dark Cloaked Creepy Guy...
KleptomaN

Replies: 7
Views: 2278

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 10:48 am   Subject: Dark Cloaked Creepy Guy...
quote:Originally posted by Fat Assasin:
Put him in a scene. A sufficiently creepy background would add greatly to his overall creepiness.

I know you're right about this, but I absolutely DESPISE dra ...
  Topic: Anyonw wants to Color this?
KleptomaN

Replies: 6
Views: 1827

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 2:42 am   Subject: Anyonw wants to Color this?
She's touching the "camera" with her right index....

Anyhooo, here's my lame attempt:

http://www.geocities.com/klept0man/gfx/tech-girl-color.txt

EDIT:

http://www.yod.net/members/kleptoman/gfx/ ...
  Topic: Dark Cloaked Creepy Guy...
KleptomaN

Replies: 7
Views: 2278

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2001 1:44 am   Subject: Dark Cloaked Creepy Guy...
YES. Well, kind of. Corel spoiled me with its superior interface and customization options.
Photoshop isn't bad, it's just not as good (if you ignore Corel's stupid inability to detect varying pressur ...
  Topic: Dark Cloaked Creepy Guy...
KleptomaN

Replies: 7
Views: 2278

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2001 2:50 pm   Subject: Dark Cloaked Creepy Guy...
He also has glowing eyes n' stuff
http://www.yod.net/members/kleptoman/gfx/forest11.jpg

Some info about the pic: It's based heavily on the Keepers and/or Garrett from Thief: The Dark Project ...
 
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