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her arm is very short.
she does not appear to have a shoulder-blade (is this the right word for it?)
her ... erm ... hip seems to be out of perspective. like the camera was moved a bit to the right w ...

well, continue it. i want to see it finished.

and ... give it a good context.

he definitly needs that bone sword, i guess. can't wait to see it.

and ... yes ... this one muscle appears pretty much ot of place on his left arm.

while the overall pic is great, i really hate his ...

yes, he's got more than one arrow now.

but - still - the picture does not tell what he's really doing.

right eyebrow is definitly strange ... once you start staring at it.

don't really like the grey-green right side of her face ... but there's no need to change this.

great piece of art.

whoa ... is worth every minute you spend on it.
hope you post more in-progress pics of this one.

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taking into account it's your first 30min ... you didn't fail.
although you messed the mouth images/smiles/icon_wink.gif

a bit more patience would ha ...

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however, colouring is realistic except for her right shoulder and the lower part of her metal arm thing.
good work on her skin so far.

and great line ...

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however, a + for the grass and the surroundings.

but a definit - for the female part. looks like it aged alot.

don't like the lines you colored with a simple, soft, yellow "glowing". they look like spaghetti.
hmm ... well ... the hair looks quite flat, doesn't it?

also you might want to keep a lill secret nex ...

the pencil part impresses me, but i just HATE the combo ... earth's moon and a shot from mars?!

1) the whole picture has different dimensions, different level of detail and different coloring in it. ...

except for his chin and under his left eye - his face still lacks those "hills" that make a face appear to be male. look at an ape ... it's extremely visible on an ape's face. or touch your own face a ...

unless you plan to add a complex object to the front part ... go on detailing the castle ... since you always mention it to be the most immportant part. additionaly drawing the path to it fine and sha ...

if you are out for a lotta work: hundreds of asymetric mirrors ... some of them broken

easier approach: make it a two-worlds picture .. with an forest and fantasy items (castle, white horse something ...

one first-view thought:
first one) the head doesn't fit the body
second one) the face-details wont fit the head-arrangement
third one) effect is less obvious than before ... but ... head doesn't fit t ...

a pro on the arrangement.
a big pro on his weapon and face ... and his overall body seems more convincing. definitly a step forward.

so wanna know what he appears do be doing?
arrowhead thick - match ...

i don't think this rope will support him in any way images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif
it looks like it would slip off his back as soon as i press the START button on this picture.

great work anyways.

malice's hips seem strange ... too straight.

your style just isn't meant for pencil drawings.
take a look at [url=http://www.penny-arcade.com/]http://www.penny-arcade.com/ ... this is the style for ...

if you don't want to give more details to the surroundings, try it the other way round:
the green is too "loud" ... it takes too much attention and leaves nothing for the center part of your art ... w ...

digi it.
but keep it as lovely as the painting is images/smiles/icon_wink.gif

ignore me if you don't agree ... but ... something seems not right about the green ... or is it his right leg?

i'm not sure ... needa think about it a little longer.

well, seems natural.
nothing wro ...

strang thing.
a new scanner would be a great idea.
pencil art without the fine shades pencils do is just ... well, let's say, it loses lotta quality this way images/smiles/icon_wink.gif
you might as ...

my 2 cents:

don't color it ... it's wonderful art the way it is. IF you want to pratice coloring, start a picture which you intend to play a bit around with.
Otherwise you might be sorry about having ...

the problem with the far eye could become even more disturbing when you have finished the picture.

looking at the reference i suggest you consider taking care of the forehead above the eye. this is w ...