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Heh, I don't doubt it - my perspective's pretty shaky.

Thanks for the crit!

Two recent pieces of mine.

http://www.nicolecardiff.com/gallery/undeadcrusader.jpg

http://www.nicolecardiff.com/gallery/samurai.jpg

Cheers!

http://www.nicolecardiff.com

I like the fourth one. It's very expressive and the style looks amazingly unified for two artists to have worked on it...

My one recommendation for change would be to make the background in the seco ...

I hear you guys - I'm headed off to SCAD in the fall, and I'm hoping I don't need remedial art classes or something... I don't do much life drawing (I know, it's a bad habit and I should do more) so I ...

Critique away...

http://www.theneogenesis.com/unmasked/galleries/mythicalpics/skies.jpg

Well, I'd have to disagree - I went to Ringling's Portfolio Day and got nothing but "Draw more from life."

Now, I could've dealt with that advice if there was something else in the way of constructiv ...

I get the "wasting your life" from quite a few people too... *sigh*

Test scores:

SAT: 1510
ACT: 31
IQ: 140

GPA: 3.98

Art schools seem to really not care much about test scores - they're more inte ...

Yes, you do have to bus around Savannah, but they provide the bus, so it's no big deal.

The reason they couldn't expand a single building is that there are historic buildings all over the place, so ...

Ringling definitely has classes in Maya - matter of fact, that's the only program they use for animation. They've got a separate wing for all the animation, and their computers just got updated 2000is ...

Whew! Got that second figure largely done, and reworked the wing (again images/smiles/icon_smile.gif ) ... Tell me what you think now!

http://www.tbns.net/gryphon/angel_vi.jpg

You might want to tame down the orange in her hair - moonlight tends to grey out colors. You might also want to add a slightly warmer glow to the moon, if you want it to be more prominent... if not, l ...

Okay - I reworked the lighting, worked on his legs, and finished detailing the feathers. I still have to get in figure #2 in the corner, though...

http://www.tbns.net/gryphon/angel_iii.jpg

Jezebel - there actually will be another figure in the bottom right corner, which (I hope) will fix the compositional problem. Once that section's painted in, you'll know what he's doing, too. images ...

I'd definitely move her hand to the left a little... and give her a little bit more of a hip. I like her expression and face, though, as well as the clean lines. Nice work!

http://www.tbns.net/gryphon/angel_ii.jpg

This is a obviously unfinished painting - he will have a knee, I swear. images/smiles/icon_smile.gif In the meantime, though, please critique it... I will c ...

I think the general consensus was not dealing with whether work was polished or not, but rather the subject matter. "High" fantasy is typically Tolkien-themed, with fair maidens, elves, and so forth. ...

I'd have to disagree. I, at least, wasn't born wanting to be an artist. I played around with it, but I never thought I'd do anything serious with it up until three years ago or so. Now I can't imagine ...

I can't tell what's going on with the first one either... but I do have a few recommendations for the second. She needs a heel on her left foot, wider hips, and a smaller chin area/ higher jawbone - f ...

This was a fairly quick image done for Web consumption. It's for my site, so please critique - I want the site to look good, and since it's for me, I can always correct any weird spots anytime. I love ...

This is really nice work - the dragon's head is phenomenal. images/smiles/icon_smile.gif My tiny bit of crit would be this: add a little more blue to the more distant moss. It'll increase the depth.. ...

Okay - lighter chest and darker eyes, as ordered. images/smiles/icon_smile.gif Anything else I should take care of?

http://www.tbns.net/gryphon/peacockxi.jpg

Hmmm. Your monitor must be much darker than mine, then - it looks like a mid-value purple to me. Still, I'll lighten it some more, and work on the eyes. Thanks for the comment, Eric!

See if these skin tones are better - I still have a few places to rework, I think, but here she is now...

http://www.tbns.net/gryphon/peacockx.jpg

*rereads* Oops - I forgot to make her wrist thinner. Nuts. Oh well... I did work on her fingers/hand positioning; see what you think of it now.

http://www.tbns.net/gryphon/peacockix.jpg

Hah - Socar, if you're a man, then so am I... 80% confidence. *laughs* I'd say their test is pretty ridiculous. Interesting - though a bit sad - that employers prefer male employees; I would've though ...

Much better than the original! You're making great progress. My recommendation would be this: taper her lips at the two ends. Female lips are also larger on the bottom than the top.

Her ears are too ...

Victory is mine! Muhahahahaha!

http://www.tbns.net/gryphon/peacockviii.jpg

edit: updated image to reflect new detailing/anatomy work

[ June 16, 2001: Message edited by: Gryphon ]

Okay - reworked with curves and a semi-decent background.

Here's the [url=http://theno1artist.tripod.com/peacock3.html]link ...

Edit: Argh. Just found out that Tripod has declared that no remote ho ...

Definitely [url=http://www.goodbrush.com]Craig Mullins.

Here's the[url=http://theno1artist.tripod.com/Gallery/peacockvi.jpg]image for anyone else who can't see it...