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Topic: Vast scribble dump |
Critical Pete
Replies: 7
Views: 4427
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2007 7:35 pm Subject: Vast scribble dump |
These are fun to look at. |
Topic: Giant Horsey Man vs Rainforest Crack Commandos |
Critical Pete
Replies: 4
Views: 3880
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sun Oct 14, 2007 11:06 am Subject: Giant Horsey Man vs Rainforest Crack Commandos |
lol awesome. |
Topic: Portrait of a friend |
Critical Pete
Replies: 4
Views: 2775
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2007 1:44 am Subject: Portrait of a friend |
The lighting makes him look kinda rat-like... Otherwise I think it's good. |
Topic: The Riven Two |
Critical Pete
Replies: 8
Views: 3705
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 7:07 pm Subject: The Riven Two |
Wow. Great colours, composition and mood. I don't fully understand the subject matter so I can't really comment on that, but it seems to have an interesting story behind it. Maybe it would be nice ... |
Topic: Sketchbook : full of girls - evil men and creatures :: |
Critical Pete
Replies: 44
Views: 33186
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 11:37 am Subject: Sketchbook : full of girls - evil men and creatures :: |
It's good to see more traditional work. I like the second to last and last ones best. |
Topic: Couple images from my bachelor's work. |
Critical Pete
Replies: 9
Views: 6319
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 6:26 am Subject: Couple images from my bachelor's work. |
It's good, except that you forgot to apply the perspective to the figures. The guys in front should be much larger or the guys in back much smaller. |
Topic: Backyard pastels |
Critical Pete
Replies: 4
Views: 2561
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu May 31, 2007 6:33 pm Subject: Backyard pastels |
Looks nice. It's got an inviting feeling to it. It'll be cool to see your future works in pastel. |
Topic: Felicia Hardy.... :::Updated::: |
Critical Pete
Replies: 8
Views: 4701
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sun May 27, 2007 3:08 pm Subject: Felicia Hardy.... :::Updated::: |
Looking good. Can't say I really like the fold on her upper thigh though, as it upsets her curves and looks out of place. When you run out of room, just stick a new sheet of paper underneath and con ... |
Topic: Sijun Tiles IV >>> Official Thread -- Winner Posted |
Critical Pete
Replies: 222
Views: 140981
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 9:19 am Subject: Sijun Tiles IV >>> Official Thread -- Winner Posted |
If there's still room, count me in. |
Topic: Mossy Cradle (update Feb 22) |
Critical Pete
Replies: 23
Views: 12854
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2006 4:40 pm Subject: Mossy Cradle (update Feb 22) |
Wet, and windy as hell yesterday.
I like her expression a lot. |
Topic: MY FIRST MANGA |
Critical Pete
Replies: 2
Views: 2277
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 9:02 pm Subject: MY FIRST MANGA |
it's good, but the lips are at a different angle than the nose and eyes. you should rotate the lips clockwise a little and it should be fine. great colouring. |
Topic: Self Portrait - Profile View - Age 19 |
Critical Pete
Replies: 8
Views: 5359
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 12:13 am Subject: Self Portrait - Profile View - Age 19 |
Good stuff, especially the eye area. |
Topic: Condoleezza Rice Caricature |
Critical Pete
Replies: 4
Views: 2378
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 11:37 am Subject: Condoleezza Rice Caricature |
Hmm... Ya it's good but you're missing her teeth with the big gap in the middle. Just I think it's an important feature to show with Condoleeza. |
Topic: medusa and a robot |
Critical Pete
Replies: 1
Views: 1687
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 11:34 am Subject: medusa and a robot |
The medusa one is great. Great expression. I think you could use a bit more shadow under the seat though, just to sepearte the plane of the wall with the floor. Is the train stopped? If it's movin ... |
Topic: Gothic 3 Fanart |
Critical Pete
Replies: 3
Views: 2457
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 12:50 pm Subject: Gothic 3 Fanart |
I think it's really a good image... Just that your facial proportions and features and just generally the way you render faces brings the quality down. But other than the face, your anatomy is actua ... |
Topic: The Penguins |
Critical Pete
Replies: 4
Views: 2197
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2005 2:42 pm Subject: The Penguins |
lol, that's funny. great expressions man. |
Topic: Mother's will |
Critical Pete
Replies: 4
Views: 2438
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 3:28 am Subject: Mother's will |
Hmm... Yeah, never seen a warrior like that before either. I guess she has a lot to protect, but wouldn't it suck for her if halfway through a fight her water broke?
Anyway, interesting concept a ... |
Topic: The Speedpainting Thread (IV) |
Critical Pete
Replies: 40861
Views: 17812010
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 3:26 am Subject: The Speedpainting Thread (IV) |
flaptraps: really like your 'mindless sketch' pic
judson: your pic makes me
M@. luc, Capt. Fred, oDD, Vyle and everyone else, damn good stuff, keep it up!
craptastic
http://gallery.passion4a ... |
Topic: :: Heavens Drive |
Critical Pete
Replies: 8
Views: 2937
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2005 12:40 pm Subject: :: Heavens Drive |
That's awesome.
If you gave the guy a samurai sword, like Reakshun said, then it'd look way too much like the bike scene in Final Fantasy Advent Children though. |
Topic: 10 best works |
Critical Pete
Replies: 11
Views: 5624
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 6:38 am Subject: 10 best works |
For finished I would say 1, 3, 5
For speedpaint 6, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13 |
Topic: Homo sapiens macrotus - updated version posted, with detail |
Critical Pete
Replies: 29
Views: 16335
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Mon Sep 05, 2005 1:55 am Subject: Homo sapiens macrotus - updated version posted, with detail |
The crispness in the first definately works, except in the sky which looks too grainy ( but I like the sharpness of the bats at the top ). The face is also cooler in the first version. You could pro ... |
Topic: The Speedpainting Thread (IV) |
Critical Pete
Replies: 40861
Views: 17812010
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 12:33 pm Subject: The Speedpainting Thread (IV) |
Nice stuff everyone.
http://gallery.passion4art.com/members/yasin/screwinaround2.jpg
( wishin I could use colours like igino instead of having to use change hue trick ) |
Topic: pin-ups :: after work |
Critical Pete
Replies: 21
Views: 11123
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2004 9:54 am Subject: pin-ups :: after work |
Your poses look so natural. Do you use any models to pose for you, or any other sort of reference, or do you have enough knowledge so you can just do these from your head? |
Topic: ORCs!!! (Updated 12/19) |
Critical Pete
Replies: 17
Views: 7271
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2003 4:58 pm Subject: ORCs!!! (Updated 12/19) |
Really cool. They are very sculptural in their rendering. Almost looks like painted clay. |
Topic: Goat Lord |
Critical Pete
Replies: 2
Views: 1763
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Thu Nov 27, 2003 4:55 pm Subject: Goat Lord |
I agree with Al Ian about the staff. It's a nice concept, but it really doesn't look finished. It's a bit odd how some parts ( like the body ) have an outline and others ( like the top of the staff ... |
Topic: yay, my first robot! |
Critical Pete
Replies: 6
Views: 3731
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2003 7:49 am Subject: yay, my first robot! |
40 hours? Wow... Anyway, they look good. Especially since it's basically it's your first try at it. Keep it up. |
Topic: Chinese Girl |
Critical Pete
Replies: 11
Views: 5733
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2003 12:17 am Subject: Chinese Girl |
Wow, so soft and subtle. I'm interested to know your process in creating these. |
Topic: Lord of the Earth |
Critical Pete
Replies: 10
Views: 4531
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2003 11:11 pm Subject: Lord of the Earth |
It's good, but it could use more contrast on the face. I know you are reducing detail as the objects move further into the distance, and this works well for the tail, but I think the detail is lost a ... |
Topic: The Mouse Catcher |
Critical Pete
Replies: 6
Views: 3320
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2003 11:07 pm Subject: The Mouse Catcher |
Okay. I'm commenting just cuz I want your hobby to continue. Really I don't think I can offer you any input on this. Technical stuff isn't my forte. ![Confused](images/smiles/icon_confused.gif) |
Topic: HELLO SIJUN FRIENDS |
Critical Pete
Replies: 33
Views: 12869
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Forum: Gallery/Finished Work Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2003 4:09 pm Subject: HELLO SIJUN FRIENDS |
Geeze... I think it's safe to say you got that scholarship... |
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