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  Topic: Encounter in Crateria
Allen W

Replies: 18
Views: 3610

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2002 10:36 pm   Subject: Encounter in Crateria
Great picture. I like how you've captured the jungle in the background with just a few relatively simple tree shapes. About the only thing that is a bit strange about this picture is how she is standi ...
  Topic: self portrait + a kodama
Allen W

Replies: 10
Views: 2383

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2002 10:33 pm   Subject: self portrait + a kodama
Nice picture. The features are very crisply picked out. Even though I have no idea what you really look like, this portrait somehow gives me the impression that it's a very good likeness just due to t ...
  Topic: Stuff for a game
Allen W

Replies: 8
Views: 2275

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2002 10:29 pm   Subject: Stuff for a game
Hi,

The shading in the eyes of the first one make the expression a bit strange, but that's minor. Besides that the pictures are great.

Were these done in Photoshop? I think I can see some of the har ...
  Topic: an intellectual dragon
Allen W

Replies: 18
Views: 4275

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2002 10:23 pm   Subject: an intellectual dragon
Thanks again to all the commenters.

Awetopsy: Thanks. Good point about the flesh-colored chessboard... but supposing you were made of chrome, would you like to have a chrome chessboard?? images/smil ...
  Topic: silly little sketch...first work posted
Allen W

Replies: 16
Views: 2843

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Wed Apr 24, 2002 9:52 am   Subject: silly little sketch...first work posted
This is really cool.

Even if it's with a mouse... you should color it! I think you've made it hard on yourself by drawing so precisely, because this warrants a very tight and neat style of coloring! ...
  Topic: hi and my art
Allen W

Replies: 11
Views: 2097

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Wed Apr 24, 2002 9:45 am   Subject: hi and my art
Nicely done. I like the textures you've put on the helmets and the little patches of snow/ice/wear&tear they have. My only suggestion, compositionally, is that you might want to consider having some e ...
  Topic: an intellectual dragon
Allen W

Replies: 18
Views: 4275

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Wed Apr 24, 2002 9:02 am   Subject: an intellectual dragon
Thanks to all who replied:

scylla: I don't know what to say either, but THANK YOU for your enthusiasm! images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

guy: Thanks for the compliments. If I see floating chessboards an ...
  Topic: Love it... NOW!
Allen W

Replies: 11
Views: 1946

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Tue Apr 23, 2002 7:21 pm   Subject: Love it... NOW!
Aww, it's sooo cute!... it's so... AAAAAHHHHH OH MY GOD IT is SCARY AS HELL.

Wow, great design on that thing. It looks so harmless at first but then the strangeness just gets to you.. images/smiles/ ...
  Topic: an intellectual dragon
Allen W

Replies: 18
Views: 4275

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Tue Apr 23, 2002 7:19 pm   Subject: an intellectual dragon
Here's my latest... I'm basically done with it but I'd like to hear any crits/suggestions since I'm always trying to get better. images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

http://pages.sbcglobal.net/aw4og/art/ld ...
  Topic: if you vaporize it, the negative effects are about the equiv
Allen W

Replies: 10
Views: 1475

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Tue Apr 23, 2002 7:07 pm   Subject: if you vaporize it, the negative effects are about the equiv
The expression on the lower frog that's getting snorted up the tube into the flying elephant/octopus/hoover is fantastic. images/smiles/icon_smile.gif
  Topic: Gerbil in the sea...
Allen W

Replies: 9
Views: 2295

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2002 8:30 pm   Subject: Gerbil in the sea...
Nice! As others have pointed out, the waves need to get smaller sooner. I think maybe some more sparkles on the waves directly in front of the sun might be good too.

But these are minor, it would be ...
  Topic: I f r i t
Allen W

Replies: 9
Views: 1976

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Fri Apr 19, 2002 11:56 pm   Subject: I f r i t
Very nice! images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Is that piece of cloth under the sword hand NAILED to his chest? That is badass. images/smiles/icon_cool.gif

Besides the hand thing, another minor point... ...
  Topic: Potential Painting
Allen W

Replies: 5
Views: 1309

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Apr 15, 2002 9:21 pm   Subject: Potential Painting
It'll be a great painting. My favorite parts are the twisted tree to the right of the picture and the frog on the log... (it IS a frog, right? images/smiles/icon_smile.gif )

I think it would look ni ...
  Topic: Battle Angel Alita (Gally)
Allen W

Replies: 21
Views: 6248

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Apr 15, 2002 9:12 pm   Subject: Battle Angel Alita (Gally)
Beautiful. I like the coloring of the second one better than the third, as well, but I think the newly-added arm from the third is a definite must. Great job on this, looks really good.

The only thin ...
  Topic: character sketch in progress
Allen W

Replies: 10
Views: 2090

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Apr 15, 2002 7:14 pm   Subject: character sketch in progress
Bastion,

I think your design is pretty nice. Although the legs are longer than they might be in reality, I think it would be a fine stylistic decision to keep them long. Your character (and his choic ...
  Topic: Just another Batman thread? [UPDATED]
Allen W

Replies: 18
Views: 5554

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sat Apr 13, 2002 12:41 pm   Subject: Just another Batman thread? [UPDATED]
I think the skin is okay as it is. If his mask were to be more blue the skin would be too yellow, but since it's purple the tones complement each other.

I agree with totuus, the head is too big on th ...
  Topic: : :Not Special, just some work of a loser...^.^: :
Allen W

Replies: 8
Views: 1870

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Mon Apr 08, 2002 10:45 pm   Subject: : :Not Special, just some work of a loser...^.^: :
What can I say but... FINISH THE THIRD ONE!!! It kicks ass. images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

a crit on the one you just posted: it looks nice besides the implants. (think they should be closer together) ...
  Topic: Bug
Allen W

Replies: 6
Views: 2137

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Apr 08, 2002 9:33 pm   Subject: Bug
Nice bug design! images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Just one small thing, the shadow you have drawn looks like the light is coming from straight above... but the shading on the bug indicates that the ligh ...
  Topic: my shot at matte painting :Q
Allen W

Replies: 14
Views: 2258

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Mon Apr 08, 2002 8:19 pm   Subject: my shot at matte painting :Q
Combine the colors on GreenPeach's bus with Henrik's building on the left... then Gecko's repaint of the sky. images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Can't wait! This makes me want to go find some pictures to ...
  Topic: Scanned stuff [sketches] - large download
Allen W

Replies: 6
Views: 1401

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Mon Apr 08, 2002 8:13 pm   Subject: Scanned stuff [sketches] - large download
really nice hands... I can't draw hands at all. images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Also like the genie!
  Topic: Futuristic Inquisitor with smoking gun ;-) c&c
Allen W

Replies: 6
Views: 1653

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Apr 08, 2002 8:06 pm   Subject: Futuristic Inquisitor with smoking gun ;-) c&c
Hi,

The design for your character is cool. I'm no more qualified than anyone else to tell you how to paint digitally, but I have some suggestions for the general lighting of the pic... I did a rough ...
  Topic: Horned man
Allen W

Replies: 8
Views: 2026

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Mon Apr 08, 2002 7:27 pm   Subject: Horned man
Hi,

Basement bound's right, my shading was too high contrast and shiny for something like stone.

As for stoney texture, I think you have good beginnings for texture on the horn.

You asked about te ...
  Topic: Horned man
Allen W

Replies: 8
Views: 2026

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Sun Apr 07, 2002 4:03 pm   Subject: Horned man
Hi,

I tried a paintover to give you some ideas. Hope you don't mind...

http://www.people.cornell.edu/pages/aww6/temp/coaldevil-2b.jpg

I really like the high contrast between the shading of the ey ...
  Topic: Quick monochrome->colour study
Allen W

Replies: 3
Views: 1141

PostForum: Gallery/Finished Work   Posted: Sun Apr 07, 2002 3:36 pm   Subject: Quick monochrome->colour study
I like the hair. images/smiles/icon_smile.gif

Is the lightbulb just a reminder of the light source?

I'm certainly curious about the tonal->color method you used. Do you need different layers for ...
  Topic: Time is running out... Better get it up!
Allen W

Replies: 17
Views: 3885

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Sat Apr 06, 2002 5:54 pm   Subject: Time is running out... Better get it up!
I like the first one much better. In the second one it's hard to see the shape of the guy.
  Topic: cyborg
Allen W

Replies: 7
Views: 2316

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Sat Apr 06, 2002 5:51 pm   Subject: cyborg
From looking at the series of pictures it looks like you did actually mirror the face. I think it's okay to use this technique, but then you have to be sure that you re-shade the mirrored side so it f ...
  Topic: Winged Gunner Woman (sketch) *updated again*
Allen W

Replies: 14
Views: 2258

PostForum: Work in Progress   Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 9:19 pm   Subject: Winged Gunner Woman (sketch) *updated again*
Ben, I agree with razzak, your inking is excellent. The lines are clean and I really like the way you did the hair...

What are you planning on doing for the background? Any inking there?

BTW, razzak ...
 
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